Some people say that in order to be happy, you must have a job you love doing. Others say that other factors are more important. Do you think that people can only be happy if they have a job they really enjoy? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is thought having an occupation that people find fascinating is a way to be happy. Meanwhile, some claim that there are far more functional ways to address it. From my point of view, while I accept that doing an enjoyable job can improve happiness, I believe that other factors also play an important role.
On the one hand, doing an enjoyable job is the main key to address the financial pressures. Following a survey, people who work in a favourite occupation have much more motivation and also deal with less stress than others, which means that they are able to stay at work longer. As a result, their work performance is enhanced considerably, and they have a chance to get a promotion. Thanks to this, people will get a higher range of salary, so as to get rid of economic problems.
On the other hand, having a job that people really enjoy is not the only way to feel happy, family members also set a vital function for long-term happiness. Looking after parents can create positive emotions. For example, whenever parents get rid of sickness thanks to their care, they will escape the stress and feel relieved. Then, their parents will not be isolated and also have lifelong partners to communicate with on a regular basis. Therefore, their parents feel pleased in the rest of life.
In conclusion, while it is true that doing a favourite occupation is a way to make people feel happier, there are far more functional factors that have to be considered. Each person has their own way to create happiness, so there should be no fixed factor for making everyone to be happy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 443, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ople will get a higher range of salary, so as to get rid of economic problems. On the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, really, so, then, therefore, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1318.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72401433692 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55828123305 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534050179211 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0977973178 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1428571429 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21428571429 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267099243479 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896582751491 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564015623474 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167482688849 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0205020798946 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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