Write an essay comparing and/or contrasting two people, two places or two objects that have made a favorable impression to you. Be sure to write about your ideas in detail.
One of the most essential things when preparing for a vacation is luggage. It is an everlasting problem: should I carry my backpack, or just throw everything into a suitcase? When taking convenience and mobility into account, I personally think the backpack outweighs the suitcase.
From the convenience aspect, there are clear differences between the backpack and the suitcase. When the travelers need something inside the backpack, they have to take everything out. Unlike the neatly arranged items in the suitcase, one may prefer the suitcase more. But because the suitcase has a definite shape, it is too bulky to carry around during short trips, while the backpack’s size depends on the number of things it has, making it more flexible. The backpack is also generally made of cotton or nylon, which is significantly lighter than hard plastic, the material used to make suitcases. In conclusion, the backpack is a better choice for people that value convenience.
That leads to mobility. The suitcase is just not suitable for anyone that needs their necessities in reach. Its weight and inflexibility make it impossible to move in difficult landscapes, such as forests or mountains, in contrast with the backpack which is perfectly capable of it. Even walking in cities is hard, considering the suitcase has wheels, the carriers have to be careful not to roll over people’s feet. In addition, stairs also prevent the carriers from using the wheels, thus forcing them to lift the suitcase every step. To sum up, the backpack is preferable because it’s easier to carry, compared to the suitcase that doesn’t fit with any landscape.
To summarize, when considering the convenience and mobility, users may find backpacks more appealing. They are more appropriate for traveling, and they are also more affordable than suitcases.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, thus, while, as for, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1551.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23986486486 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83440711223 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591216216216 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.4910001614 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2352941176 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4117647059 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11764705882 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0408982430595 0.244688304435 17% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0137499074315 0.084324248473 16% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0200138338899 0.0667982634062 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0230277086344 0.151304729494 15% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.018077162806 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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