It is obviously thought that working hour is one of the biggest section in a day for grown up’s lives and because of this, people’s welfare are directly depend on the contentment of job. I believe, people should not spend major part of their time in throughout the world and every kind of job.
Generally, individuals are not pleasure with their job because of the working conditions but I think, the circumstances could be improve with afford of bosses. There are some reasons which are provide the feeling of satisfaction such as job’s salary, working hours, insurance and security of life, office environment and technical sources and even our collegues contribute to fulfilment. Of course, these are seperated as major and minor factors but it is all essential for a good working life. In other words, our stress level, self esteem and confidency determine the how much we love our job.
As can be expected the factors are just a dream for most people because of the requirement the modern world and there is a degree system in the jobs. So, possibility of that the all jobs is same is almost impossible. Whereas, chance of finding a decent job is not unbelievable but people should figure out what they love or interesting about and what thing they like to do. These are crucial questions for become to real the full satisfactory of jobs. In my opinion, what a job promises should be suit with our aspirations for our life style and make happy to all people is quite achievable.
In conclusion, indivual’s wellbeing is one of the most important thing and cause of the long hours which they spend at work effect the satisfaction of job. I believe, there are several factors for underpin the gratifications of a job and it can be said that is possible for all workers.
- In their advertising businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some ways Why is this Do you think this is a positive or a negative development 56
- The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 67
- Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research business and academic world Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely Discuss both these views and give y 67
- The charts below show the main reasons for study among students of different age groups and the amount of support they received from employers Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write 73
- Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime Others however argue that the circumstances of an individual crime and the motivation for committing it should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishm 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 194, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'provided'.
Suggestion: provided
...osses. There are some reasons which are provide the feeling of satisfaction such as job...
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Line 3, column 567, Rule ID: THE_HOW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'how'?
Suggestion: how
...l, self esteem and confidency determine the how much we love our job. As can be expe...
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Line 5, column 498, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'suited'?
Suggestion: suited
... opinion, what a job promises should be suit with our aspirations for our life style...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, whereas, i think, in conclusion, kind of, of course, such as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77741935484 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71125338195 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541935483871 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5225575736 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.923076923 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8461538462 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.440096211767 0.244688304435 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142209156107 0.084324248473 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619256362806 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261489583509 0.151304729494 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481158163157 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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