Human beings are being judged according to their social status and material possession. Old fashioned values such as kindness and trust seems no longer important. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
We are living in a world where people are judgemental about others just by their social ranks and wealthiness, therefore they forget one pivotal factor that makes up a good citizen which is moral values. From my perspective, it is not totally wrong to judge someone by their personal possession, (thêm and their power ) however, I do share the same thoughts with those who consider intrinsic values as an important factor when evaluating a being.
Undoubtedly, one’s possession and social ranks reflect one’s - thay bằng talent and intelligence. This can easily be seen among governments around the globe, every head-of-state are- is endowed with the ability to control the shift of the whole country and sway the opinion of the press. It is worth bearing in mind that these qualities also represent one’s quintessence of effort and ultimately, willpower. It is not easy to climb up to such a position in society and also possess a colossus amount of assets let alone gain respect from other people. Thus, if someone takes into account these qualities when asserting people, it is not untrue of them to do such as.
However, I strongly believe that fundamental values of a being are the true indicator of who they are, and above all, they decide a society’s fate. A civilization without ethical standards is a dead civilization, there would be death overshadowing every corner, people would be desperate, crime being committed without hesitation. One prime example is the USA-one of the most developed country with the highest income per person. Besides its people’s prosperity, there exists a sad reality that countless inhumane actions taking place every single day throughout the country from school shootings to bank robbery and mass murders. This is the result of the negation of moral values of some group of people, had it not been for this, America would have been the most worth living nation in the world. Hence, ethical values play a pivotal role in individual assessment, and moreover, they decide the whole society’s existence.
In a nutshell, I hold the belief that the fact that both the people who take into account material values and those who use time-honored standards when evaluating other human beings have their own strong points, and I agree with both of which.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1924.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 380.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06315789474 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68405782507 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592105263158 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 599.4 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.8724387055 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.428571429 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1428571429 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21428571429 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170717955639 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507060419199 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413228889681 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102754382458 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0160003044634 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.