In the contemporary world, technology plays an indispensable role in people’s daily life. In fact, it is extremely difficult to imagine life without utilizing digital devices. This essay will discuss the effects of using electric gadgets such as computers in the future as well as the detrimental aspects related to the technology’s dependency.
It is undeniable that digital appliances make citizens change their routine dramatically and they are estimated to continue adjusting individual’s activities in the foreseeable years. To begin with, computers allow residents to do a variety of tasks without physical demands, which is unthinkable for the preceding generations. Thanks to technology, people now can bank, book holidays, and shop online. Furthermore, many technology enterprises have invested much in the development of technology recently in order to assist individuals to manipulate their life better. To illustrate, Google company has introduced "smart home”, a smartphone application that enables users to control all the items in their home, including lights, washing machines, air conditioners, and so on. Thus, people can make their own lives becoming innovated on account of their technology’s usage.
Notwithstanding the aforementioned merits of using electric devices, various downsides can be noticed if individuals rely quite so heavily on computers. Firstly, people’s personal details can be leaked out by frauds as the safety of the internet’s privacy is not utterly confirmed by the government. Digital gadgets have numerous vulnerabilities that hackers can easily take advantage of it, which normal residents cannot fully understand and will continue to keep their essential data on their technologies without being aware of hacking information by online frauds. Secondly, technology is the major reason that leads to the increase in the unemployment rate. Due to the strong reliance on digital devices, humans are losing their occupation positions in the hands of technology, especially jobs that are related to industrial factories or public services. Consequently, this will bring negative impacts to worldwide employment.
To conclude, I firmly concede that much as computers give individuals a massive number of benefits, future revolutions will certainly exceed human expectations. Nevertheless, even if those prospects are extremely appealing to people, it is crucial to remain responsible and never utilize them too much because of the above consequences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, thus, well, in fact, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2152.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 369.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.83197831978 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24281439689 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 176.041082164 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639566395664 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 685.8 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2785329765 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.588235294 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7058823529 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11764705882 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171483815888 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0495993839241 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477845533501 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10288237702 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0245814897557 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.78 50.2224549098 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.53 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.54 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 137.0 78.4519038076 175% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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