Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.
To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Many people argue that the extinction of numerous languages every year is not a serious problem as modern life will be less complicated without so many languages worldwide. Personally, I completely disagree with this view because I think that languages have a lot of benefits to individuals and society as well.
To begin with, language is an integral part cultural heritage of every nation because language is not only a means of communication but also it is the root of knowledge, literature, and history of one country. For example, some literary works are only available in a specific language, even if they are translated into other languages, they can hardly express the original meaning of the authors. Therefore, preserving and developing the diversity of languages would enrich the culture and development of humankind.
On the other hand, language is the identity as well as the pride of one race as it took a language thousands of years or even more to evolve and emerge in a society. For instance, I used to live abroad for several years and every time I have the opportunity to speak or listen to my mother tongue - Vietnamese, I feel like listening to my mother’s lullaby. For this reason, I believe that language plays an important role in individuals’ mental wellbeing.
In conclusion, for the reasons I have mentioned above, I totally disagree with the opinion that life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. I believe that the variety of languages shows the historical value of the world civilization and should be well-preserved to prevent culture and knowledge loss.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01858736059 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9347639609 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587360594796 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 31.8144621202 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.0 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.9 7.06120827912 197% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3699951835 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139390905053 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0882143355877 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220140586466 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0830953085119 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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