You should spend about 40 minutes on this question.
Many people today are worried about ‘cybercrime’ such as hacking and identity theft. What problems does ‘cybercrime’ cause, and what solutions can you suggest for ordinary people and businesses to take?
Give reasons for your answer, and provide ideas and examples from your own experience. You should write at least 250 words.
In the increasingly modern world, all information is updated on a database on the Internet. And society is facing an increase in cybercriminals - people hacking or stealing personal information in cyberspace to extort money. This phenomenon can lead to serious problems, which can be resolved by appropriate measures.
It can be said that this problem can be caused by several factors. The first and worst issue is the financial impact. Hackers install malicious code and steal personal information or information about business projects and then use the data to force victims to pay a large amount of money to redeem the information. In addition, these criminals can utilize the stolen information to get all the money in the victim's bank account. These not only harm individuals but also affect society as a whole because the stolen money can be used for illegal activities such as terrorism or drug trafficking. Another problem is that exposed individual information can cause unsafety and unhealthy in society. For instance, information such as name, age, residential address, especially sensitive photos can be sold to criminal organizations, underground websites, or posted on social networks thereby creating unhealthy content on the internet and an opportunity for other crimes like kidnapping and murder to run rampant.
Therefore, we need to come up with some measures to reduce this trend. For the government, the authorities should raise awareness about cybercrime for the people, quickly find and arrest those who use the Internet for bad purposes. For each individual, it is necessary to consciously protect their information and be alert to threats from cybercrime. For example, regularly upgrade the security of information and do not share personal information with anyone. Companies should create information protection software and systems and contribute them to society.
In conclusion, there are various repercussions regarding cybercriminals but they can be solved once according to measures are enlisted imperative.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, regarding, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1734.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53993610224 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08500605568 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619808306709 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.2346919646 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.375 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5625 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145884824669 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474926813541 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390502956891 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0790166445774 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359372892356 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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