You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Nowadays, it is important to raise children to be good people for society because children will build a more progressive and civilized society in the future. And a good education not only comes from family but also from school.
First of all, children are like a blank sheet of paper, they cannot distinguish right from wrong, but they have a high ability to learn and they often copy what their parents do hence parents become the first teachers of their children. Furthermore, infants spend about the first 5 years of their lives with their parents, and when they go to school, they still spend more time with their parents than at school thus young people are most influenced by their parents. In addition, parents are the ones who teach their children what to do and shouldn't be, teach them good habits and things that are the foundation of a good character such as respect for others, being responsible, obeying the rules,...
However, the school also has certain influences in forming a good personality for a child. In addition to teaching knowledge and basic skills, schools are like a microcosm of society. School is the place for children to experience and from those experiences, they learn how to co-operate with others and contribute to the community.
In conclusion, it would be an error to think that home or school is the only place to train a good person for society because both parents and school have an indispensable role in molding a people. Parents are the first teachers for a child, nevertheless, this task would not complete without school.
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- Some people say it is more important to plant trees in the open spaces in towns and cities than to build more housing To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes for example working for a charity improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages 73
- Some claim that studying abroad has greater benefits for a student s home country To what extent do you agree or disagree 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...thers and contribute to the community. In conclusion, it would be an error to t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, nevertheless, so, still, thus, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1308.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88059701493 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56612266273 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544776119403 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.035796118 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.8 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7 7.06120827912 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252650889817 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103207201017 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459429492887 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157781889783 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359016429317 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.