At now the population of some nation includes a relatively huge number of young adults compared with the number of older people Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages.
The advantage of young adults are young labor force and if there are a lot of them the econmic will be develope, old people have experience in work but they can't manual labor so they just the person who can be the CEo or a manager, in the real life there are more old manager but young people are very creative so they can make economic develope. In the real life old people make children better by there experience in life like: cooking, housework, morality and make young labor force have a great ways in their life
everyone in the world have grandma, grandpa and all of we know they are very important in our life so if the young adults, maybe old people have been dead on war or by their health so we have a few old people and that make baby or children have hard life because they lack of love by their family, we know many baby don't have enough love by their parents so old people are important in the life. Lets talk about young adults they have great creative, good health but some of them arrogant and didn't focus on working so every level of age have disadvantages.
In conclusion. Every level of age have advantages and disadvatages, but for me lot of young people have more advantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: managers
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1142.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47843137255 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36563243968 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.466666666667 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 20.2975951904 251% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 181.275496291 49.4020404114 367% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 228.4 106.682146367 214% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.0 20.7667163134 246% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215778330336 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162686657755 0.084324248473 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.238916358341 0.0667982634062 358% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228330370961 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.268339455898 0.056905535591 472% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.2 13.0946893788 192% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.0 11.3001002004 195% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.59 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.78957915832 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.4 10.1190380762 221% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 22.0 10.7795591182 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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