Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people. Why is it the case? What can be done to attract more local people to visit these places?
Some people contend that several museums and historical sites have become prominent locate to arrive by tourists. Meanwhile many museums and historical sites don’t allow local citizens to attend. This essay will analyze some main reasons as well as a measure to encourage local people to attend such places.
The induces for a huge difference in the number of the two sites of visitors are varied. Firstly, Local people who are familiar with their traditional customs and history. Local people think that need not set foot in the places due to the highest cost of tickets to come. Besides, local citizens tend to work instead of wasting time moving to museums. However, Tourists who come from other countries come to visit such places. There are many reasons why tourists were attracted by the museums and historical sites. It may be attracted by views of the museums or curious to investigate.
There are some measures to attract local inhabitants to visit museums and historical sites. To initial with, those places should have several services both education and entertainment purposes. Furthermore, those places should construct more zone games to increase more local dwellers. For instance, construct more adventure activities to assist people to have experience as well and take a rest. Nevertheless, if those places are decorated more gorgeous to pay attention people, not only tourists come to but also local people would come to experience.
In conclusion, there are two principal issues that local people are disinterest spending their time to visit and tourists as mentioned. That is why those places should take action to deal with those problems to increase types of visitors.
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- Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people Why is it the case What can be done to attract more local people to visit these places 61
- Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people Why is it the case What can be done to attract more local people to visit these places 56
- Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people Why is it the case What can be done to attract more local people to visit these places 66
- The charts below show reasons for travel and the main issues for the travelling public in the US in 2009 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 115, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Meanwhile,
...prominent locate to arrive by tourists. Meanwhile many museums and historical sites don’t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21611721612 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58728401266 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534798534799 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.4419631906 49.4020404114 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.7647058824 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0588235294 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05882352941 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.46127870859 0.244688304435 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140929572269 0.084324248473 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748976444352 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.275290767946 0.151304729494 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488957784874 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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