Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people. Why is it the case? What can be done to attract more local people to visit these places?
Some people contend that several museums and historical sites have become common destinations among tourists. Meanwhile many local dwellers do not come to join in. This essay will analyze some main reasons as well as a measures to encourage local people to pay a visit to such places
The induces for a huge difference in the number of the two sites of visitors are varied. Firstly, Local people who are familiar with their traditional customs and history This is because local people think that they do not need set foot in the places due to the high cost of tickets to visit. Besides, local citizens tend to work instead of wasting time moving to museums. However, they may be attracted by views of the museums or curious to investigate.
There are some measures to attract local inhabitants to visit museums and historical sites. To begin with, those places should have several services for entertainment purposes. For instance, construct more adventure activities to assist people to have experience as well and take a rest. Furthermore, those places should be constructed with many beautiful views that will attract a number of people not only tourists but also local dwellers who will come to visit or snap a photo. Besides, Local people have more time to hang out with their families.
In conclusion, there are two principal issues that local people are disinterested in spending their time visiting. That is why those places should take action to deal with those problems to raise the significance of people.
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- Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people Why is it the case What can be done to attract more local people to visit these places 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Meanwhile,
...ome common destinations among tourists. Meanwhile many local dwellers do not come to join...
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Suggestion: a measure; measures
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Message: Did you mean 'to set'?
Suggestion: to set
...ocal people think that they do not need set foot in the places due to the high cost...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1268.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99212598425 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57761891835 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531496062992 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0501523622 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5384615385 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6153846154 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.429317525112 0.244688304435 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14727176414 0.084324248473 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080347138843 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.259445363706 0.151304729494 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0796367497653 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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