imal. On the other hand, the lecturer finds all the reasons mentioned by the reading dubious and refutes them all by specific details.
First, the reading states that the breaking of the fossilized leg bone revealed many small branching channels inside, which shows the blood vessels were once located. On the contrary, the professor mentioned the fact that soft flexible organic is not necessary blood vessels, like after animal dying bacteria live in hollow of bones, so this soft flexible could be reminded of this bacteria.
Furthermore, the author argues that tests showed that the spheres contained iron a material vital to the role of red blood cells in transporting oxygen. Conversely, the lecturer brings up the idea that fossils that have red blood cells could show many different things and is not a reasonable idea for exist of blood vessels.
Finally, the reading passage holds the view that collagen is a fibrous protein that is the main component of living bone tissue, and finding this protein in the dinosaur leg showed blood vessels exist in this animal. In contrast, the speaker dismisses this issue due to the fact that finding collagen shows how long this protein exists, so collagen could be from another source, not dinosaur fossils.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Imal
imal. On the other hand, the lecturer finds ...
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Line 2, column 377, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...this soft flexible could be reminded of this bacteria. Furthermore, the author argu...
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Line 3, column 247, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...ls that have red blood cells could show many different things and is not a reasonable idea for...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, finally, first, furthermore, if, so, in contrast, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 22.412803532 71% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 30.3222958057 73% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.01324503311 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1052.0 1373.03311258 77% => OK
No of words: 208.0 270.72406181 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05769230769 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 4.04702891845 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35933795623 2.5805825403 91% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 145.348785872 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.540411800872 107% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 419.366225166 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 13.0662251656 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 21.2450331126 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 31.4811248924 49.2860985944 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.285714286 110.228320801 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7142857143 21.698381199 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.7142857143 7.06452816374 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0762647724264 0.272083759551 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0355459284255 0.0996497079465 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0236165508244 0.0662205650399 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0437402625692 0.162205337803 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302774180685 0.0443174109184 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.3589403974 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 53.8541721854 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.0289183223 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.66 12.2367328918 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.42419426049 110% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 63.6247240618 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.7273730684 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.498013245 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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