Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school.
Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
In this day and age, people have a different view in choosing an environmental education for their children. While some people believe that home schooling has a lot of benefits for both parents and their children, I side with those who feel that school will have a more positive impact for the improvement of any children.
The main benefit of studying at home is that parents can save money for themselves. It is argued that some parents might cut down on their budget, such as tuition fee, other fees for extracurricular activities , transport, etc. For instance, according to the Labor of Love, there are above 2 millions American children who choose to have home schooling. Moreover, the other benefit of this kind of education is the flexible schedule, which means that the schedule of a child can be changed if they study at school. In fact, children have a private problem with themselves, they won’t need to request anyone.
However, I agree with the traditional education method like study at school because it can bring up many positive impacts for the improvement of these children. Firstly, good manners are the way pupils can learn in class by relying on their own rules. For instance, the popular regulation of school is punctuality, so pupils can create discipline for themselves. In addition, school can teach children to get knowledge of soft skills because of the interaction with teachers and friends. Take communicative skill, it is one of the common soft skills that children can learn in any circumstances.
To conclude, it is argued that both home-schooling and learning at school have their own positive impact. However, I completely believe that studying in class is the way children should choose because they can learn many things there.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, while, for instance, in addition, in fact, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05102040816 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77633947889 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537414965986 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5047970979 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.071428571 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298625301101 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113911603577 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690603661521 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202141560173 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060570370899 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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