TPO 18
Given the information in the text, Torreya taxifoha which is a type of a tree becomes extinct and sicentifics try to avoid this matter by presenting three solutions. However, the lecturer finds all the solutions dubious and presents some evidence to refute them all.
First, the author argues that by implanting the tree in the suitable cooler and wet location which is named microclimate, the tree might have been survive. On the contrary, the speaker dismisses this issue due to the fact that the microclimate location is not the same as past dedicate because of global warming. In other word, global warming causes increasing in temperature of this rigion so, the place would not be convenience for Torreya taxifoha.
Moreover, the reading passage indicates to the trasnfering Torreya into the different location far from microclimate, otherwise forests futher north of Florida. By so doing, the reading sates that human could help Torreya to become alive. Conversely, the professor brings up the idea that migration a kind of plant into the unprotection environment might be harmful in order to perevious experience about black tree that kill other plant so quickly.
Finally, the reading holds the view that by preserving Torreya in the labratory with contoroling condition, it could be possible to survive them. In contrast, the lecturer underlines the fact that, there is no enough room in the research center for thriving the tree and it could not immune form the diseases.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 20 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 10 2
No. of Sentences: 10 12
No. of Words: 241 250
No. of Characters: 1213 1200
No. of Different Words: 141 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.94 4.2
Average Word Length: 5.033 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.651 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 86 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 71 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 47 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 29 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.1 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.718 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.9 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.372 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.372 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.096 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 4