Nowadays, people are able to use the internet to do an increasing number of tasks.
These days,people have an opportunity to use the internet in order to do a large amount of tasks. There are both positive and negative sides,as for the former,it can save a time,for the latter,it makes people impatient.
From my point of view,life is becoming easier with the help of internet. Nowadays, roughly every problem is solved with the help of internet,as learning something easier and faster or even the opposite,teaching someone to solve any mathematical issue,how to be healthy and etc.So,there are many people who use internet with the aim of doing tasks because it can save a time and there is no need to consider about tasks,the way how it can be solved and done. On some situations,it is very useful,for instance when there is no time to do tasks or when the majority of people becoming busy ,internet can give a supportive hand,then.In internet,there are many ideas and almost every task is prepared,so it is much convenient,to do almost everything with the help of internet.
Moving to negative side,as we can get used to do almost all tasks quickly at any time,it can make the majority of people impatient. There are many occasions when internet lead people to become nervous, sometimes,while some video is downloading slowlier,so it can consume much time and might annoy them or when there is no information about task which is searched,in many cases,it can impact on people badly, which is not appropriate for good and enjoyable life,as a result,they may loose job or even friends.So,patience is needed nearly everywhere in our life, however for some people who get used to do everything with internet,it might seem as a hard challenge for them.
By way of conclusion, internet is a demand for people's daily activities and a requirement for some offices and buildings.This trend might influence on people sometimes positively and sometimes negatively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, then, while, as for, for instance, as a result, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1567.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.071197411 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14028605516 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53074433657 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 154.967738578 49.4020404114 314% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 195.875 106.682146367 184% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.625 20.7667163134 186% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.375 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 40.0 5.01903807615 797% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264869528906 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140639545644 0.084324248473 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075371198699 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173540439051 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434309326594 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.8 13.0946893788 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.45 50.2224549098 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 11.3001002004 171% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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