In some countries, small town-center shops are going out of business because people tend to drive to large out-of-town stores. As a result, people without cars have limited access to out-of-town stores, and it may result in an increase in the use of cars. Do you think the disadvantages of this change outweigh its advantages?
Small shops in city centers cannot compete with giant retailers on the outskirts in many nations throughout the world, and as a result, many of those small enterprises are faced with closure. This has a variety of repercussions, including an increase in automobile ownership in these nations and a reduction in access to major out-of-town retailers for individuals without cars. This modification, in my opinion, causes more harm than benefit.
Increasing bankruptcies among small town-center businesses is a sad scenario that causes tremendous difficulty to local residents, particularly those who do not own a car and must now go to a remote location to shop. The time spent on such excursions may be better spent on more important pursuits, such as work or amusement. The problem has far-reaching consequences that go well beyond individual levels. Any city's economy suffers a major loss when a big number of such enterprises are forced to close. This might have unintended consequences for the country's economy as a whole.
This shift in people's buying preferences, on the other hand, may encourage them to relocate to out-of-town locations. Given that modern cities are experiencing overcrowding and, as a result, the ever-increasing strain on housing supply systems, this may be seen as a first step toward alleviating that pressure.
In conclusion, the tendency of shopping at huge stores outside of city centers has a number of negative consequences. Although it may inspire some individuals to relocate to areas where these businesses are located and assist in the resolution of some population issues in modern cities, I doubt that the trend will have any substantial consequences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30855018587 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15762440664 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617100371747 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.1316097562 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.91666666667 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292095483936 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0819040311111 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713707951588 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148550307845 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266185634711 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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