Task 2: Nowadays, a lot of offices have open-space designs instead of separate rooms. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Offices create space for employees to complete their occupation. Open-space designs could bring more satisfaction and convenience for workers than traditional separate rooms. Despite the fact that replacing separate rooms to open-space designs is controversial, I believe that having designated free space in the office carries more benefits than drawbacks.
Firstly, free space tends to be organized by the desire of employers; this means officers are able to create their magnificent working space which assists them to be comfortable and distressed while doing their jobs. For instance: the workers will be more creative and estactically when they complete their job in their favorite space. In addition, open-space office support employees to communicate much better, which is beneficial in bringing the relationship between officers better. For example: officers will have chances to talk with their colleagues effortlessly, they will have mutual understanding and help each other in their jobs. At the result, the more communication in a job the employee has, the higher productivity in their occupation.
In spite of the advantages of open-space designs, the existence of its obstacles is completely undeniable. Free space can be noisy and distract the concentration of each worker while they are focused doing their job, which leads to arguments between employees. Besides, open-space offices could not bring private space for officers and this is able to lead to the leak of their information. In this case, separate rooms may be the better choice for the office.
Although I have supposed that there are drawbacks of an open-space office, its benefits still outweigh disadvantages. For resolving some issues occuring in the free space office, the managers could list the rules for having friendly and peaceful space for everyone. In many ways, open-space office brings many benefits and mayl replace separate room in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, if, may, so, still, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52173913043 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89189958107 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52508361204 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9109524713 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.066666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86666666667 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301798317357 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123496888171 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074954780158 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222064499254 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626026562436 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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