Some people think that advertisements encourage people to buy things that they not really need. Others sag it is the way to give people information about products. What is your opinion?
If is a fact that most of the companies spend a lot of money on advertisement in these days to inform customers about its new products. Manu argue that publicity of innovative goods and products motivates ends users to spend money on unnecessary items. Opponents put arguments that it is a ideal method of giving information about company’s new products and services. While i believe that advertising products attract attention of customers and convince them buy more, i strongly support the view that the original purpose of publicizing new products is to provide useful information to consumers regarding it.
On the one hand, There are many potential reasons of why some individuals think that commercials appeal customers to by commodities that they do not require. First of all, In the modern age, people are surrounded by posters such as on walls of public places, vehicles and Television adds as most of the organizations make efforts to promote their new offerings through advertising. It gives information by adding both the audio and visual contents to impress customers. Therefore, they also buy products they do not really intend to buy. Secondly, company produce a range of goods and products nowadays as because of technical advancements they bring gadgets for the convenience of people. Consequently, it provides variety of products for community to choose from and it results more sales of the business. Finally, Discounts and concessions are shown by advertisement agencies to enhance its turnover as offering products on price less than its real market price appeal more users. Hence, they purchase items even they do not need them.
On the other hand, i strongly believe that posters and pamphlets are distributed among people for the purpose of giving information regarding services of the company. First of all, For the expansion of company, it adds new items in the product line as society demand innovative products according to their tastes and preferences. Consequently, whenever a corporation launch its products into the market, they publicize via internet, Television or newspapers. In addition to this, it describes useful features of commodities such as price rate, colours and quality by demonstrating. Most importantly, company prefers the famous superstars as a brand ambassador to make huge sales that does not only attract customers but also boost sales of company.
To conclude, Although i believe that advertisements impress consumers by showing its usefulness, i personally believe that it is used as a informative tools to build customer base.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If is a fact that most of the companies sp...
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Line 1, column 142, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'argues'.
Suggestion: argues
... customers about its new products. Manu argue that publicity of innovative goods and ...
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Line 1, column 142, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Manu) must be used with a third-person verb: 'argues'.
Suggestion: argues
... customers about its new products. Manu argue that publicity of innovative goods and ...
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Line 1, column 289, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ems. Opponents put arguments that it is a ideal method of giving information abou...
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Line 1, column 375, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...pany’s new products and services. While i believe that advertising products att...
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Line 1, column 401, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rvices. While i believe that advertising products attract attention of customers...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ile i believe that advertising products attract attention of customers and convi...
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... the original purpose of publicizing new products is to provide useful informatio...
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...rn age, people are surrounded by posters such as on walls of public places, vehic...
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...vision adds as most of the organizations make efforts to promote their new offeri...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ir new offerings through advertising. It gives information by adding both the aud...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... and preferences. Consequently, whenever a corporation launch its products into t...
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Line 7, column 23, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...s of company. To conclude, Although i believe that advertisements impress con...
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Line 7, column 138, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...i personally believe that it is used as a informative tools to build customer bas...
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Line 7, column 152, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'tool'?
Suggestion: tool
...elieve that it is used as a informative tools to build customer base.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, hence, if, really, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in addition, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2183.0 1615.20841683 135% => OK
No of words: 411.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31143552311 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99442317849 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537712895377 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 691.2 506.74238477 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5841360119 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.277777778 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.11111111111 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235477029998 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711231486808 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517093042603 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129097651316 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0594936706598 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If is a fact that most of the companies sp...
^^
Line 1, column 142, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'argues'.
Suggestion: argues
... customers about its new products. Manu argue that publicity of innovative goods and ...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 142, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Manu) must be used with a third-person verb: 'argues'.
Suggestion: argues
... customers about its new products. Manu argue that publicity of innovative goods and ...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 289, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ems. Opponents put arguments that it is a ideal method of giving information abou...
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Line 1, column 375, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...pany’s new products and services. While i believe that advertising products att...
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Line 1, column 401, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rvices. While i believe that advertising products attract attention of customers...
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Line 1, column 411, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ile i believe that advertising products attract attention of customers and convi...
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Line 1, column 544, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the original purpose of publicizing new products is to provide useful informatio...
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Line 3, column 224, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rn age, people are surrounded by posters such as on walls of public places, vehic...
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Line 3, column 318, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...vision adds as most of the organizations make efforts to promote their new offeri...
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Line 3, column 387, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ir new offerings through advertising. It gives information by adding both the aud...
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Line 5, column 353, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and preferences. Consequently, whenever a corporation launch its products into t...
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Line 7, column 23, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...s of company. To conclude, Although i believe that advertisements impress con...
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Line 7, column 138, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...i personally believe that it is used as a informative tools to build customer bas...
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Line 7, column 152, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'tool'?
Suggestion: tool
...elieve that it is used as a informative tools to build customer base.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, hence, if, really, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in addition, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2183.0 1615.20841683 135% => OK
No of words: 411.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31143552311 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99442317849 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537712895377 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 691.2 506.74238477 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5841360119 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.277777778 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.11111111111 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235477029998 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711231486808 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517093042603 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129097651316 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0594936706598 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.