It is commonly believed that the necessity of traveling has been paled into insignificance as the tremendous advancement of media has enabled people to learn about a new culture from books, films, and the Internet. However, I would contend that traveling still brings about incomparable experiences that cannot be derived from any other materials.
To begin with, it is difficult to refute the idea that knowledge related to culture would be easily accumulated from books, films, and websites without a need for spending money on traveling. In this day and age, it is prevalent among people to share about their exhilarating times spent in new places via reviews, pictures, or vlogs. In this way, web users are capable of grasping new cultural knowledge more conveniently and economically. In addition, books or movies also constitute a reservoir of knowledge where people can learn about the culture. For instance, when watching a foreign movie, watchers can broaden their point of view about the lifestyle of local people through the personality traits and clothes of film characters.
However, I personally believe that traveling is considered to be an irreplaceable approach to new patterns of culture. The primary reason for this sentiment is that setting foot in new lands would bring about first-hand experiences which could not be stemmed from books, films, or the Internet, such as communicating with indigenous people, trying local delicacies, and visiting numerous tourist sites. Therefore, travelers are able to gain a deeper insight into the customs of the locals and its regional cuisine based on their own exposure and feelings. Meanwhile, information got from other sources is likely to be subjective and distort the truth. To illustrate this point of view, a majority of foreigners are under the impression that Vietnamese people wear conventional clothes and conical hats on a regular basis. No sooner had they paid a visit to Vietnam than they realized that it is a common fallacy. Accordingly, traveling is worth a try.
In conclusion, even though traveling still has some shortcomings, this way of exploring new culture would not be superseded by any other sources of information like films, books, and the Internet.
- It is not necessary for people to travel to other places to learn about the culture We can learn as much as from books films and the Internet To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
- In some countries many young people choose to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies Discuss the advantages and disadvantages 89
- It is not necessary for people to travel to other places to learn about the culture We can learn as much as from books films and the Internet To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 441, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, first, however, if, so, still, therefore, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1885.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26536312849 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90436847908 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575418994413 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4066206293 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.666666667 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8666666667 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246352412676 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796955918177 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606178730153 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158867999543 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642018017299 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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