The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The diagram illustrates production of ethanol fuel from corn. Overall, nine major steps are involved in the process to produce the ethanol.
First of all, the corn is is harvested and stored in a safe place. Subsequently, milling of corn is done to prepare it for cooking. Following milling, water is added to the milled corn and it is cooked for up to 4 hours. After the process of cooking, the mix is left for fermentation for approximately 48 hours.
Later, after the mix is fermented, the liquid and the solid by-product is separated and the liquid which is obtained is ethanol. But, the fuel obtained isn't pure as it contains certain impurities. Hence, a purification process is performed on this impure ethanol and it takes almost 5 hours to extract impurities from fuel. After the obtainment of ethanol it is stored in a container until it's further use. Later. when the demand arises the fuel is transported where ever it is required.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 24, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: is
... the ethanol. First of all, the corn is is harvested and stored in a safe place. S...
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Line 5, column 153, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...ined is ethanol. But, the fuel obtained isnt pure as it contains certain impurities....
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Line 5, column 325, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... hours to extract impurities from fuel. After the obtainment of ethanol it is stored ...
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Line 5, column 415, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
...container until its further use. Later. when the demand arises the fuel is transport...
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Line 5, column 415, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “when” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...container until its further use. Later. when the demand arises the fuel is transport...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 787.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8282208589 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76829231795 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58282208589 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.2947942632 43.030603864 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.5454545455 112.824112599 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8181818182 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 5.23603664747 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148779651744 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625331464154 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622701636956 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115913754088 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695186851358 0.0819641961636 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.2329268293 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.14 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.