Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?
Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?
It is true that criminals commit crime again after they have been punished. While there are several reasons for this alarming trend, some effective measures can be taken by government to tackle this problem.
First of all, offenders become fearless once they commit offence in the light of fact that this action requires guts. If an individual becomes courageous enough to execute such fearless act probability of committing another one increases certainly. One of the reason for this situation is the company they live in. Criminals are locked in prison and it's obvious that they become friends due to identical mentality. During their tenure in jail they tend to share information with each other about how they planned and performed a crime. This influences the others carry out the same or plan other crimes with inmates. Another possibility of executing a misdeed is the means of earning money. People who are poor and uneducated lack skills to maintain. Also it is difficult to find job with criminal record as no one would hire an ex-convict to spoil the firm's reputation.
However, there are certain strategies to counter theis problem. Instead of focusing on punishment the government should focus on enhancing the mind-set changes necessary for an offender to develop commendable personality. For juveniles, therapy sessions should be introduced. With proper guidance and motivation their mind-set could be changed as kids are more vulnerable to problems of choosing erroneous path. In case of adults, vocational training should be implemented which prepares them for life outside prison. They can learn practical skills such as computer programming, car maintenance or cooking. In this way they can be hired for jobs that require this certain knowledge and skills.
To summarise, it is evident that re-offenders are one of the problems in our community but it can be resolved by focusing on rehabilitation rather than punishment itself.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 119, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...of fact that this action requires guts. If an individual becomes courageous enough...
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Line 5, column 752, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...and uneducated lack skills to maintain. Also it is difficult to find job with crimin...
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Line 5, column 854, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'firms'' or 'firm's'?
Suggestion: firms'; firm's
...e would hire an ex-convict to spoil the firms reputation. However, there are cert...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, while, such as, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1773.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27678571429 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7458595273 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613095238095 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6005161124 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4285714286 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.42573560696 0.244688304435 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11761559628 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.147452620206 0.0667982634062 221% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.323344069274 0.151304729494 214% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.268807397898 0.056905535591 472% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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