International travel is becoming cheaper than before, so more and more countries are opening their doors to tourists. Do the advantages of increased
tourism outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, there is an increase in the number of nations developing their tourism as global travel is becoming cheaper. While this tendency could cause several issues, I believe that its benefits are more superior.
On the one hand, there are a variety of disadvantages when nations become more concentrated on tourism. Firstly, it is hard to maintain travel destinations’ initial shape. This is because there are several kinds of visitors and maybe some parts of them do not have good behaviors and do reckless actions that harm the scenery. As a result, the government has to spend a large amount of money for maintenance and refurbishment. Secondly, it also has detrimental impacts on the environment. It is clear that the increase in the number of visitors makes the amount of waste grow rapidly. If these waste is not properly treated, especially plastic, it would contaminate the air, land and water.
On the other hand, the development of tourism brings several advantages to a country. First of all, it could help a nation develop its economy. Indeed, tourism accounts for a major proportion in economic development factors. The growth of tourism could improve both agriculture and the hospitality industry because the requirements about food, transportation and accommodation are higher. Secondly, it gives great opportunities for local people to exchange knowledge. Foreign visitors can bring their knowledge as well as experiences to a country and share with local people. Therefore, locals can learn a lot of new things and apply some of these good things to their life.
In conclusion, although the advancement of tourism has some negative effects, I maintain it can help a country develop its economy and local people improve their knowledge. In my opinion, the government should encourage tourism and implement some policies for better control.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 269, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, as to, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26174496644 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93986545313 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560402684564 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6241917869 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1111111111 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5555555556 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.44444444444 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196025332753 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550364027097 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064094214846 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126246185672 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559509184882 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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