Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes.
Do you agree or disagree?
Certainly, it is a fact that a few decades ago, individuals used to dress traditionally to convey the culture of the provinces, or religions. However, nowadays, where the young generation is following a unique fashion in their daily wear, it hardly remains a question of culture and character from their choice of outfits. Therefore, I firmly disagree with the aforesaid statement.
On the one hand, it is easy to know the culture of people, if they dress traditionally as per the locality. Additionally, it is also common to understand the culture of people, if they dress religiously. However, in both above cases, it is difficult to predict the character of persons because the character is navigated by minds, rather than the clothes. For instance, there may be ten numbers of women in a Muslim family, who use veils to cover themselves. However, all those ten women would not be the same in characters and behaviours.
On the other hand, in a country, such as India, where foods, languages, cultures, and dresses keep changing every few miles, one cannot depict the culture and character from it. At present, individual fashion and choice of outfits are changing as per their comfort. women and men both prefer to wear dresses as per the occasions. For example, a growing number of women are increasingly choosing to wear western outfits in offices or parties because it provides an infinite degree of comfort, which traditional dresses cannot provide. On the contrary, the same group of women prioritise wearing traditional dresses as per the festive season demands. Therefore, in such cases, it is hard to predict the culture and character of a group of individuals.
To conclude, I somewhat agree that traditional dresses are useful to know the culture of some people. However, in major cases, it cannot be predicted because nowadays individuals are changing their lifestyles, and also preferring to wear the dress as per comfort zone and occasions.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, therefore, for example, for instance, such as, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08978328173 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86437781332 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501547987616 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6284024461 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.75 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1875 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8125 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152479425457 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555153053854 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497286445894 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10764812176 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371385506905 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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