benefits of music
With the emergence of mass media, music is becoming popular in daily life. seemingly, music brings the profound merits for individuals and societies. First and foremost, music might connect each person to the past. As a case in point, ‘’Tien Quan Ca’’, written by Nam Cao, is filled up with reminiscence of the brave Vietnamese soldiers having shed their blood for the revolutionary cause. Owing to those pieces of music like this, each individual can cultivate their own patriotism and has more understanding of history as well as conventional culture belonging to the whole nation. As a result, those are more likely to be better citizen, even devote more their lives for the cause of national construction and defense. In addition, exposing to beautiful melody exert a couple of positive effects on people’s health, seemingly. Obviously, should a person compose or listen to any song, that one’s sentiment could be expressed and evoked. Because music is linguistically neutral, anybody can understand and lend a sympathetic ear, which backs in feeling further relieved. Furthermore, learning to play an instrument such as piano, violin, guitar, cello with a regular practice combined listening to music Mozart can enable learners to enhance gradually their intelligence. In conclusion, catchy rhythm and symphony of songs is greatly advantageous, especially when people retain respect for them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 76, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Seemingly
...usic is becoming popular in daily life. seemingly, music brings the profound merits for i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1191.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 219.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43835616438 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93297876247 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.712328767123 0.561755894193 127% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7439875469 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.272727273 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9090909091 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.54545454545 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159350155246 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658974029321 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635677059467 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159350155246 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.06 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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