The table below shows the percentage of the population by age groups in one town who rode bicycles in 2011.
The table illustrates the proportion of people in one town by age group using bicycles in 2011.
In general, the number of women cycling was higher than men. It was immuatably true that chidren from 0 to 9 years old were objects using bicycle the most.
In 2011, the percentage of female children under 9 years old riding bicycle was 51,3% while this number of young boys in the same age group was lower with 50,3%. Teenagers from 10 to 17 years old came in the second with the figure of females was 42,2% and the data of males was 24.6%.
It could be manifest from the table that the proportion of the population cycling decreased with age before increasing slightly at the age group of 60 and older. The percentage of middle-age people from 18 to 38 who chose bicycle as their preference was 17.1% with women and 9.7% with men. The data dropped slowly to reach the bottom of 12.3% and 8% for women and men between the age from 40 to 59. In contrast, the number of people over 60 years old using bicycle was 18.5% and 13.2% which was higher than that of previous younger age group of two sexes, respectively.
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- Some people think that school should teach the children to be a good person however others think that the teacher should teach them how to develop their career and make money To what extent you agree or disagree 67
- In many countries today people buy a range of household goods TV microwave oven and rice cookers Is it a positive or negative development 67
- The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 53
- Task 2 In many countries today people buy a range of household goods TV microwave oven and rice cookers Is it a positive or negative development 67
- The bar chart below shows the percentage growth in average property prices in three different countries between 2007 and 2010 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 40, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... In general, the number of women cycling was higher than men. It was immuatably t...
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Line 7, column 223, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to bicycle'
Suggestion: to bicycle
...ddle-age people from 18 to 38 who chose bicycle as their preference was 17.1% with wome...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, while, in contrast, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 914.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45853658537 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25583254871 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521951219512 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6424416783 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.555555556 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7777777778 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.23603664747 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245454860239 0.215688989381 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120115931942 0.103423049105 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123446128417 0.0843802449381 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189148324501 0.15604864568 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.145750049201 0.0819641961636 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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