Dear Nick,
First of all, many congratulations on buying a new apartment for your family as you have been living in a rented house for the last two years. I am so delighted after hearing the news from your recent letter that I received yesterday at my home.
You have organized a special lunch get-together with all your friends at your new residence on coming Friday, however, I'm not able to come on the same day as I'll be out for a business tour in Dubai. I hope you do understand the concern. But, I have prepared a gift for your new home as a token of our friendship and love.
The gift contains all the household items like cosmetics, imported fruits, juices, and many others essentials in the form of a gift hamper. I have posted the present at your new residence, and I hope you expect the delivery in the next two or three days. The delivery order number is CAAS2333 from Blue Dart courier services, and you can track the order by calling from your phone number as I have shared with the delivery services company while posting at your new address.
As they offer elite services, you do not need to worry about the gift hamper. Plus, you have to get the household essentials as you have shifted yesterday. I think the gift hamper which I have prepared for you would be useful to your family members, and you'll need to worry about the shopping for a two-weeks at least. Besides, it was my way to keep you happy as you are dilly dally when it comes to shopping for your daily needs. Lastly, I'll be coming back soon after my trip, and would like to come to your place which we can plan later on.
Looking forward to hearing the response about the lunch and my gift.
Warm Regards,
Shwatank
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 120, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ew residence on coming Friday, however, Im not able to come on the same day as Ill...
^^
Line 5, column 159, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
... Im not able to come on the same day as Ill be out for a business tour in Dubai. I ...
^^^
Line 9, column 255, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
...d be useful to your family members, and youll need to worry about the shopping for a ...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 440, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
... shopping for your daily needs. Lastly, Ill be coming back soon after my trip, and ...
^^^
Line 11, column 70, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e response about the lunch and my gift. Warm Regards, Shwatank
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, if, lastly, look, so, while, at least, i think, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 26.3917525773 155% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 937.175257732 149% => OK
No of words: 315.0 206.0 153% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44444444444 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 3.78020617076 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31540243486 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 127.690721649 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536507936508 0.622605031667 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 427.5 290.88556701 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.463917525773 1078% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.436400411 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3333333333 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.395785431896 0.216113520407 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138049606897 0.0766984524023 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664615056742 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219623542846 0.12726935374 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0829546312823 0.0580467560999 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 120, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ew residence on coming Friday, however, Im not able to come on the same day as Ill...
^^
Line 5, column 159, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
... Im not able to come on the same day as Ill be out for a business tour in Dubai. I ...
^^^
Line 9, column 255, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
...d be useful to your family members, and youll need to worry about the shopping for a ...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 440, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
... shopping for your daily needs. Lastly, Ill be coming back soon after my trip, and ...
^^^
Line 11, column 70, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e response about the lunch and my gift. Warm Regards, Shwatank
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, if, lastly, look, so, while, at least, i think, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 26.3917525773 155% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 937.175257732 149% => OK
No of words: 315.0 206.0 153% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44444444444 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 3.78020617076 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31540243486 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 127.690721649 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536507936508 0.622605031667 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 427.5 290.88556701 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.463917525773 1078% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.436400411 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3333333333 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.395785431896 0.216113520407 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138049606897 0.0766984524023 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664615056742 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219623542846 0.12726935374 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0829546312823 0.0580467560999 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.