Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money. How might having a lot of money make people happy? What other things in life can make people happy?
Money is the fuel on which the world runs. This type of fuel has given a tremendous amount of happiness to a plentiful number of individuals in the world, however, there are few people who believe that there are other activities that make life delightful in its own ways. In this essay, I will discuss both views in a detailed manner and conclude my opinion.
On the one side, there are numerous factors to make an advocate stand with the section of society that believes that money provides happiness in multiple ways of lives to an individual. The first and foremost is the fact, some of the people have the desire to own luxurious life. They want to buy anything which should a better quality and its value. As a result, money comes to play its role because it is the medium of exchange while buying products in the market. And, after that buyer of that product feels happy in its own way because he owns a product due to money. For instance, if a middle-class person, goes to expensive branded clothes or other goods, he would feel happy because he might have a desire to buy that luxury item. In other words, when a father buys toys for his or her child, it makes their child joyful after he or she receives their desired items. This kind of happiness only comes when a person has a good amount of money in their pockets.
On the other side, some people believe that there are alternative ways to stay delightful in life. Chiefly, the inner peace and satisfaction of achieving goals give you more happiness which money could not provide. Because there are people who want to earn their names in society instead of earning money in their lives. Moreover, the interaction of people such as friends, family, cousins in sharing the love and support of each other in every step of life while dealing with problems which money cannot solve sometimes. The reason is that money is not efficient to replace happiness when it comes to emotional attachment. For example, when a family loses their loved ones in the event of death, the money does not bring the life of their loved ones and there are only memories left back to remember to lead the rest of the life.
To conclude in my viewpoint, the nature of happiness comes in different kinds of ways. This essay argued that money is not only the source of giving happiness to humans because there are other ways of becoming delightful in the lives such as getting inner peace and satisfaction of achieving goals in your lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...al. The first and foremost is the fact, some of the people have the desire to own luxurious...
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...appiness which money could not provide. Because there are people who want to earn their...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, kind of, such as, as a result, in my view, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 7.30460921844 274% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2039.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 443.0 315.596192385 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60270880361 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31990926901 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47855530474 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 649.8 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9034224087 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.315789474 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3157894737 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57894736842 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350141603592 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108132881568 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629623857131 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209189462048 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054985266638 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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