The two floor plans show the renovation of AAA Accountancy's main office.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The plan indicates the setup of an accountancy firm before the renovation and after the modification work.
Overall, It can be seen that in the past the office was divided into various small compartments and after the refurbishment work the designer tried to keep It more open.
Firstly, the office before was full of different rooms with separate working station setup. The list of rooms is as follows; at first, there is an accounts office behind the front desk. Whereas, the processing and new customers office on the right of the latter one respectively. Secondly, On the south side, you'll find the storage room just next to the entrance, at the same time, the payroll office is in front of the new customer's office. Last but not least, on the eastern phase is the lunchroom, meeting room, and manager's office.
On the other hand, the updated version of the same can be seen as more open and spacious. The front desk is made wider and on top of it, a seating arrangement is added for the visitors. Mainly, the workstation is in the center without any partition, along with the fax and copier machine. But, the eastern part remains the same and the storage room is shifted towards the front desk.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 136, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are an accounts'?
Suggestion: there are an accounts
... list of rooms is as follows; at first, there is an accounts office behind the front desk. Whereas, ...
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Line 5, column 148, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'accounts'' or 'account's'?
Suggestion: accounts'; account's
...ms is as follows; at first, there is an accounts office behind the front desk. Whereas, ...
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Line 5, column 219, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'customers'' or 'customer's'?
Suggestion: customers'; customer's
...t desk. Whereas, the processing and new customers office on the right of the latter one r...
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Line 5, column 310, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
...pectively. Secondly, On the south side, youll find the storage room just next to the ...
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Line 5, column 425, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'customers'' or 'customer's'?
Suggestion: customers'; customer's
...e payroll office is in front of the new customers office. Last but not least, on the east...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, whereas, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 998.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72985781991 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48067031432 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578199052133 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.33902439024 230% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.4021173098 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7272727273 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1818181818 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 5.23603664747 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0695313607733 0.215688989381 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0277758786884 0.103423049105 27% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342658143688 0.0843802449381 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0494717887816 0.15604864568 32% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418487992744 0.0819641961636 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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