The movement of people from the countryside into the cities is happening in many parts of the world, resulting in the problems, especially in cities.
What are the causes of this movement, and how can it be reversed
Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, more and more people are migrating from rural areas to urban areas. such movement in significant quantity results in a variety of issues in the developed area. In this essay, the problems of such movement of people and how it can be flipped are explained in the below paragraphs.
On the first hand, People move from undeveloped areas to urbanized locations for a variety of reasons. For instance, young graduates looking for better opportunities or a businessman looking for a wide range of markets for expanding try to settle in cities. Talking about the fact that this shifting puts a lot of pressure on the government. The megacities get overcrowded and it can be seen in the public transport of that particular city. Secondly, the most common issue of inflation takes place, as the supply is more the demand goes down and Competition for a better job or any service becomes very difficult. Last but not least, more people will generate excess pollution with respect to many fields.
On the other hand, the government has taken a plethora of decisions to eliminate this movement and develop the countryside. First of all, the connection between both is improved to facilitate easy access and fast transportation which will develop the rural lands as the link among the both will be fast and nonstop. After that, the officials should undertake the initiative of making small villages into smart cities. For example, the Indian government has launched a new scheme under which the authorities have asked the youths to participate in this scheme and contribute their ideas for developing the villages of India according to their perspective and the best idea will be carried forward.
To conclude my essay, I would say that at the present time the governments are more focused on this sector, and more and more countries are following the same pattern to overcome the migration blunder.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 79, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Such
...rating from rural areas to urban areas. such movement in significant quantity result...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, as for, as to, for example, for instance, talking about, first of all, with respect to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01577287066 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72669096429 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580441640379 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8180809708 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.571428571 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6428571429 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6428571429 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193871057452 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673320497321 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556689214373 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111767713973 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0723773291704 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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