Living in a country where you have speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems.
To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement ?
Resliding overseas and having to converse in a different language than one's native tongue can lead to severe social issues as well as everyday challenges. In this essay I completely agree with this because it has more benefit for some reasons.
First of all, the main reason I agree is because of the serious issues with the social location. If a person is unable to effectively interact with local people in the surrounding area, they are likely to reside isolated. It is because intimate relationships require effective communication and this is extremely challenging when one does not have full command over the language being spoken. For instance, people can lead to feeling disconnected from one's community this may even lead to depression and other mental illnesses that can be destructive to the fabric of society.
Furthermore, not having full command over the language spoken in the country you are living in can lead to practical issues. Many everyday tasks assume that you have a command of the language. More specifically, interactions for public transportation and other social services are often only provided in the native language of an area. This can lead to challenges in using an accessing services. For example, when I was on holiday in France I found it extremely difficult to understand when ferries were going because the detailed instructions were only available in French.
To sum up, from where I stand I totally agree that having to speak a foreign language leads to issues at the societal.Therefore, It is strongly recommended to be aware of these issues in advance and to build strategies to deal with them.
- Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make Is this a positive or negative development 67
- Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary schools rather than secondary school Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages 78
- At the present time the population of some contries includes a relatively large number of young adults compared with the number of older people Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages 73
- Many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages 56
- At the present time the population of some contries includes a relatively large number of young adults compared with the number of older people Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages 56
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Suggestion: Therefore
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommended being'.
Suggestion: recommended being
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, as well as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05166051661 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94084597465 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560885608856 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4675363201 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.083333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5833333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256990481981 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0956481339657 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633529826698 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1547333459 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.022896412871 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.