The diagrams below show how floods happen in a village and give two solutions to deal with them. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparation where relevant.
The given maps illustrate how a village is affected by floods and two methods to avoid. Overall, almost every part which is near the river will be flooded when floods happen. The plans are to either relocate the buildings inside the flood area or build dams upriver.
There are two rivers in the village, merging at one point, river A running from north to this cross, river B from west to east. The buildings near the river A include residental area and industrial park, while the commercial buildings locate alongside river B, all are at risk of flooding.
The first solution involves the relocation of every buildings near the river, shift out of the flooding area. The industrial park and residental area would be relocated to the north, while the commercial buildings would be moved to the opposite direction. This solution is environmentally friendly yet costly.
The second method proposes two dams and reservoirs to be built at the way out the village of both rivers to prevent flooding. Although remaining low cost, there would be some consequence to the land
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 158, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...t to east. The buildings near the river A include residental area and industrial park, wh...
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Line 3, column 111, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... river, shift out of the flooding area. The industrial park and residental area wou...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 896.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95027624309 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58532840412 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574585635359 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1035823546 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0909176931094 0.215688989381 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0466554309049 0.103423049105 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466378625314 0.0843802449381 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0629464792659 0.15604864568 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501384450367 0.0819641961636 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.