The graph shows the amount of fruit produced in four countries (France, Spain, Germany, Turkey) from 1970 to 2010
The given line chart illustrates fruit production in 4 different countries including France, Spain, Germany and Turkey between 1970 and 2010. Overall, the general trend for Turkey and France was upward, while the opposite was true for Germany and Spain.
In 1970, Spain supplied around 5.5 million tonnes, whereas only 2.5 million tonnes of fruit were made in Germany. The amount of fruit produced in Spain reached its peak at over 6 million tonnes in 1980, before witnessed an annual decrease at just over 5 million in 2010. Germany's fruit production experienced a slight decrease from 1970 to 2010 to reach its lowest point at just over 1 million.
By contrast, both Turkey and France saw an increase in general. While the figure for Turkey slightly increase from around 2 million tonnes in 1970 to over 3.5 million in the end of 2010, the quantity of fruit made in France experienced a fluctuation between 1 and 2 million from 1970 to 2000, before increased rapidly to just under 3 million in 2010.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, whereas, while, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 835.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85465116279 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44003253842 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540697674419 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.737775617 43.030603864 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.285714286 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5714285714 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 5.23603664747 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348683459539 0.215688989381 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173496587131 0.103423049105 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648594637749 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246635046806 0.15604864568 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431849990763 0.0819641961636 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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