it is better to enjoy your money when you earn it or is it better to save your money for some time in the future? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

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it is better to enjoy your money when you earn it or is it better to save your money for some time in the future? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

In the whole world money is a very valuable thing on earth.it is very useful in things like buying foods, paying for education, paying hospitals bills and buying other valuable things like insurance.In my opinion, I think money saves are the most important thing for the future purpose. Am going to elaborate on my reasons in the essay below.

First of all, saving money for future purposes help a person in unanticipated situations.By the way of example.During my university days, I used to save my money.Unknowing to me there is this emergency situation that occurs. This situation really requires a huge amount of money for me to solve the problem, so what could I have been my fate if am not the saving type.

However, ability of people to save determine how the individual will be able to copy with future stresses.By the way of example.I can recall, during my university days a friend of mine used to have a huge of cash with him but he does not know how to manage money neither does he knows how to save money.The first week the money enters his hand, he mismanage the money and got broke next week.This causes a very serious effect on his academic performance because when his is broke he will not be able to buy his handout nor any materials necessary to study.

By the conclusion, with the following reasons explained above I think is very necessary to save money for future uses.

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saving money for future purposes helps a person

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if i am not the saving type.

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the ability of people to save determines

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I think is very necessary
I think it is very necessary

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No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2

No. of Words: 255 350

Avg. Sentence Length: 36.429 21.0 //Always put a space after punctuation marks. Essay e-rater is sensitive.

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Score: 19 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 7 15
No. of Words: 255 350
No. of Characters: 1117 1500
No. of Different Words: 140 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.996 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.38 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.336 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 69 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 43 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 30 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 23 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 36.429 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 28.04 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.714 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.442 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.74 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.136 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5