More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?
Cities are often seen as places of opportunity,
but there are also some major drawbacks of
living in a large metropolis. In my opinion,
governments could do much more to improve
city life for the average inhabitant.
The main problem for anyone who hopes to
migrate to a large city is that the cost of living is
likely to be much higher than it is in a small town
or village. Inhabitants of cities have to pay
higher prices for housing, transport, and even
food. Another issue is that urban areas tend to
suffer from social problems such as high crime
and poverty rates in comparison with rural
areas. Furthermore, the air quality in cities is
often poor, due to pollution from traffic, and the
streets and public transport systems are usually
overcrowded. As a result, city life can be
unhealthy and stressful.
However, there are various steps that
governments could take to tackle these
problems. Firstly, they could invest money in the
building of affordable or social housing to
reduce the cost of living. Secondly, politicians
have the power to ban vehicles from city centres
and promote the use of cleaner public transport,
which would help to reduce both air pollution
and traffic congestion. In London, for example,
the introduction of a congestion charge for
drivers has helped to curb the traffic problem. A
third option would be to develop provincial
towns and rural areas, by moving industry and
jobs to those regions, in order to reduce the
pressure on major cities.
In conclusion, governments could certainly
implement a range of measures to enhance the quality of life for all city residents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13553113553 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65299599353 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589743589744 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5282142382 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.846153846 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1538461538 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 35.0 4.38176352705 799% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 30.0 5.01903807615 598% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.106261810828 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101853138893 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.057779641848 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.090111833526 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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