There are both pros and cons to being famous. I think there are more benefits than problems. While celebrity enjoys an ocean of love from public, they also get to experience superiority inherent in their position. Apart from that, a feeling of pride comes from the success they amass from their hard work.
From my point of view, public fall for the celebrity as they ensure that their celebrities are treated like none in the world. While they fall all over them when they pay a visit to a theatre or programme, this unceasing adulation is pure honor to a celebrity and not out of any selfish motive which should certainly make him feel overwhelmed. On top of that, a celebrated individual enjoys position of superiority and the support he receives from anyone in the society or community or in the country is matchless. With this clout in their sphere, he can cultivate people of power or prosperity and even curry favor at an opportune moment. Another benefit springs from a sense of pride that being famous affords. It renders feeling of success and motivation to move further ahead winning the love and honor from those who already adulate them magnanimously.
However, there can be downsides of being a celebrity as a mere word can be altered by someone to assasinate his character or intention. So, being careful while speaking is must. Similarly, a celebrity needs to learn to bottle up one's emotion, no matter how extreme it is. If they do, they might end up tarnishing their reputation and once tarnished, it may not be possible to salvage or reinstate it.
In conclusion, being a celebrated individual, one can gain immense exposure to public and how much they love him. Superiority and feeling of pride and honor also emanate from fame. However, lack of prudence in talking and behaving can result in the loss of reputation.
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- The two maps below show an island before and after the construction of some tourist facilities Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measured could be taken to solve them 84
- Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school Do the advantages of this overweigh its disadvantages 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 146, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ity enjoys an ocean of love from public, they also get to experience superiority ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, similarly, so, while, apart from, i think, in conclusion, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1529.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82334384858 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6292538009 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593059936909 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3774634246 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.9411764706 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6470588235 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64705882353 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187136762303 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072008218767 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705002078999 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120143380087 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403134537725 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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