The charts below show the proportions of the world s oil resources held in different areas together with the proportions consumed annually in the same areas

The bar graphs compare the countries in terms of the proportion of aggregate oil resources they possess and the consumption they make annually.

Overall, while Middle East is the richest country in terms of oil resources outperforming all the nine areas, Asia is largest consumer outstripping all the nine areas in terms of annual consumption. By contrast, Australia and New Zealand both have the lowest proportion of the total world resources and also accounts for the lowest annual consumption.

In terms of world oil resources, Middle East comes top of the list at 56.52 percent, just ahead of canada, which accounts for 14.84 percent. Similarly, Central and South America is the next richest country, with around 8.12 percent of the global oil resources. By contrast, Australia and New Zealand have limited possession of just 0.30%.

In terms of global annual consumption, Asia's demand outstrips United States, with an annual consumption of just over a quarter. While Asia possesses minimal 2.89% of oil resources in the world, it is world's largest consumer. United States is the second largest consumer at 25.48 percent. Africa's consumption stood at 3.35 percent, which is nearly twice as little as its possession of resources in the world. Australia and New Zealand have the lowest consumption of paltry 1.31% which is slightly above the proportion of oil resources it holds.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 116, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the largest'.
Suggestion: is the largest
... outperforming all the nine areas, Asia is largest consumer outstripping all the nine area...
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Line 3, column 212, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...erms of annual consumption. By contrast, Australia and New Zealand both have the ...
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Line 7, column 201, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'worlds the largest'.
Suggestion: worlds the largest
...9% of oil resources in the world, it is worlds largest consumer. United States is the second l...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, second, similarly, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1168.0 965.302439024 121% => OK
No of words: 223.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23766816143 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71142896105 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497757847534 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 329.4 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6099159744 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.181818182 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2727272727 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.09090909091 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233836988176 0.215688989381 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0892543187072 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482433180294 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146185629277 0.15604864568 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588014927232 0.0819641961636 72% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 116, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the largest'.
Suggestion: is the largest
... outperforming all the nine areas, Asia is largest consumer outstripping all the nine area...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 212, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...erms of annual consumption. By contrast, Australia and New Zealand both have the ...
^^
Line 7, column 201, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'worlds the largest'.
Suggestion: worlds the largest
...9% of oil resources in the world, it is worlds largest consumer. United States is the second l...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, second, similarly, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1168.0 965.302439024 121% => OK
No of words: 223.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23766816143 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71142896105 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497757847534 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 329.4 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6099159744 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.181818182 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2727272727 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.09090909091 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233836988176 0.215688989381 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0892543187072 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482433180294 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146185629277 0.15604864568 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588014927232 0.0819641961636 72% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.