Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion
Some individuals dilemma that whether hosting an international sports event will bring more advantages for their country. In my view, an international event has more harm than it’s benefits.
On the one hand, international sports events help dwellers to exercise more and develop the economy of the country. Firstly, when people see athletes and so on take part in sport events, they tend to do exercise to become like that. This way helps improve their health in the long term. Secondly, the economy of that country will increase. It is easy to explain that an international event will be launched on the internet or tv programs. It helps this country become a tourist attraction and improve profits from the service field. For example, “olympic game” attracted millions of visitors when it was hosted.
On the other hand, sports events which were built for athletes in the world can have many drawbacks. The first one is that just many sectors make money from this occasion. Meanwhile, the government has to spend a huge amount of money to decorate for this event. Instead of using that money for a lot of events like that, they should upgrade infrastructure. It helps increase living standards. The other disadvantage associated with the environment. Visitors who come to watch those events can do littering. This affects the environment seriously, especially air pollution and air pollution. For instance, it is easy to see some bottles and jars at the end of the event.
In conclusion, although hosting an international sports event has many certain advantages, I think it is not a good idea.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, second, secondly, so, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.15609756098 349% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 5.60731707317 464% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 965.302439024 139% => OK
No of words: 266.0 196.424390244 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05639097744 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79291936023 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 106.607317073 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567669172932 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 283.868780488 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 1.53170731707 588% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 8.94146341463 212% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.8783188323 43.030603864 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.7894736842 112.824112599 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 22.9334400587 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26315789474 5.23603664747 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 3.70975609756 377% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277530899815 0.215688989381 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740923978669 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765204173045 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193946361482 0.15604864568 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718410384323 0.0819641961636 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.2329268293 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 40.7170731707 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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