The reasons of evvironment pollution.
The problem of Enviornment pollution, which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others are reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion the both proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate my views for some different reason of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
Analysing the statement and explaining further, the first and the foremost reason behind this is that the modern technology makes life easy but nevertheless there it has several harmful impact to environment. For example, Transportation, electronic gadgets, factories and power plants or so on other reasons those affect to environmentd day to day by with global warming increased respectively. Another striking benefit in this regard is that with the inclined of deforestation, environment lost bits actual circumstances. People destroying the forest for their numerous needs like shelter, food and clothes. Categorically discussion, it cannot be ignored that the main reason behind this is that the burning of fossil fuel as well as open burning of garbage waste or apart from these microbial decaying process is another reason which work as environment pollutants.
Probing ahead, one of the main underlying reasons stems from the fact is that Wildfire is another great reason which influence to environment widely. To epitome, in year 2020, in australia, great foreswt destroyed with wildfire, where several wild animal got lost by with climate change effected lots. Moving further, it is pertinent to mentioned that construction and demolition are another reason those imapcts in to environment by with water and air both got polluted. Moreover, indoor air pollution is another activity of mankinds which affect the air with 80% as compare to another factors, which is a great negative influencer. Apart from the reasons Mentioned above it can be clearly stated why some people are thinking that this trend is more controversial and serious.
To recapitulate, according to the argument aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that the Drawbacks of Environmkent Pollution are indeed too great to ignore.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 141, Rule ID: BUT_NEVERTHELESS[1]
Message: Use simply 'but'.
Suggestion: but
...t the modern technology makes life easy but nevertheless there it has several harmful impact to ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, well, while, apart from, for example, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1955.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41551246537 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95171040016 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565096952909 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7001784436 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.333333333 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166171616443 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520972092835 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476970068933 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0959129607276 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420467034946 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 141, Rule ID: BUT_NEVERTHELESS[1]
Message: Use simply 'but'.
Suggestion: but
...t the modern technology makes life easy but nevertheless there it has several harmful impact to ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, well, while, apart from, for example, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1955.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41551246537 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95171040016 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565096952909 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7001784436 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.333333333 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166171616443 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520972092835 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476970068933 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0959129607276 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420467034946 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.