Being a celebrity, such as famous film star or sports personality, brings problems as well as benefits.
What are the problems of being famous? Do you think being famous is good or bad?
In contemporary society, it is believed that there are a number of problems as well as advantages when people become famous by different ways, such as being a well-known movie star or sports athlete. Although there are undoubtedly some problems of being a celebrity, I hold a firm belief that its benefits outweigh the drawbacks.
Several issues can be anticipated when individuals receive a great amount of fame. The main problem of becoming famous is that one’s privacy can be seriously violated. It can be commonly found that a celebrity is often followed by fans as well as the media. Hence, their personal life can be interrupted as these followers will do their best to extract every piece of information of celebrities’ life under various forms, such as taking photos or spreading misleading news. Apart from that, famous sports athletes may have to deal with the pressure coming from the public. If they underperform in a match or a competition, huge waves of criticism coming from the press and the fans will be published, aiming at these sports persons.
In addition to the abovementioned issues, high reputation certainly brings some positive effects to famous individuals. The first upside is that these celebrities are able to make a fortune since a lot of businesses in the modern era desire to promote their products by having famous actors or athletes endorsing their brand. Thus, this will give these popular individuals a chance to earn more income for their living. Moreover, gaining more reputation also helps improve one’s status in society. This can be explained by the fact that celebrities certainly have a number of followers. Therefore, by constantly contributing positivity, such as funding charities, to the community, these famous people can gain people’s trust, which can be powerful support if they make a decision to pursue their political career.
Taking everything into consideration, this reinforces my perspective that despite the fact that being famous can be somehow problematic, it brings more beneficial influences to ones than its negative effects.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, apart from, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1772.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25816023739 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91480765922 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584569732938 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5909664924 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.133333333 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4666666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.380431654582 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126734035379 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0832004538179 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248587618441 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0753996098752 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, apart from, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1772.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25816023739 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91480765922 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584569732938 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5909664924 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.133333333 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4666666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.380431654582 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126734035379 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0832004538179 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248587618441 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0753996098752 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.