Some people believe that when busy parents do not have a lot of time to spend with their children, the best use of that time is to have fun playing games or sports. Others believe that it is best to use that time doing things together that are related to schoolwork. Which of the two approaches do you prefer?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
If I have to choose, I would prefer to use the time spent with the children to have fun playing games or sports. The reasons are as follows.
First of all, people usually only remember the special time in their childhood, and spending time with children can produce special moments for them. For example, my parents were very busy when I was a child, but they always spent the whole weekend taking me to travel. In those trips, we made a lot of lovely memories, such as igniting the campfire together, and even today, we recapitulate those unforgettable moments very often. On the other hand, if we spent all the weekends home doing things related to schoolwork, I could promise that we would not have any incredible moments that can last this long.
Secondly, children are able to do things related to schoolwork without their parents, while can't have fun without them, so spending time having fun with them is more necessary. For example, in my childhood, I could finish my homework on my own. Even if I confronted some problems with it, I could discuss my problems with my classmates and solve them together. That is to say, for schoolwork, children have their partners that can accompany them without their parents' help.
Lastly, both parents and children need relaxation and rest, and having fun together in their mutual spare time allows them to relax themselves and get a chance to rest. For example, when I was young, my parents were so stressed about their work, and I was also tired of my schoolwork on weekdays, so every weekend we all needed to relax and did not want to do what we did on weekdays anymore. Thus, we went on trips together and relaxed ourselves in the bath of nature, and that also helped us to refresh ourselves.
Therefore, I definitely think that it is best to use that time having fun playing games or sports for the reasons mentioned above.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 93, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...schoolwork without their parents, while cant have fun without them, so spending time...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, such as, first of all, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 331.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70392749245 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45647761479 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513595166163 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1316003877 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.214285714 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6428571429 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3571428571 5.45110844103 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365888571447 0.236089414692 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127666160689 0.076458572812 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119383874858 0.0737576698707 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237750989205 0.150856017488 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0788914709664 0.0645574589148 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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