Topic: Today parents spend little free time with their children.
Why is this the case? Who are more affected: parents or children?
It is true that modern parents spend their time with their kids irregularly. This is largely down to parental work intensity that resulting in negative impact on children’s mental health.
As far as Iam concerned, in today’s world individuals have to stay late at work because many jobs require extra labour. Many aspects of jobs such as banks, accountants and sales require heavy workload, resulting in an increase in the working time. Furthermore, it is true that today parents are likely to spend their free time on their smartphone rather than with their kids. They want to keep pace with the times by surfing the web and reading online news. This discourage parents from dedicating attention to their children.
Looking at the drawbacks in perspective, lack parental attention leads to severe emotional distress and behavioral problems. In the past, children developed their skills by telling stories and engaging in playful banter with their parents. By contrast, modern children spend their time clinging to the TV screen from time to time and playing on their own, giving rise to the feeling of alienation and depression. This may result in severely negative behaviours such as illegal drug use. More seriously, this may badly shape those children personalities and perceptions of life when they enter adulthood. They are more prone to develope haphazardly which make them vulnerable in an increasingly demanding society.
In conclusion, children lacking parental care may lead to severely detrimental impact on them. Therefore, parents should allocate their time suitably to give best support to their kids in their journey to adulthood.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 154, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'give the best'.
Suggestion: give the best
... should allocate their time suitably to give best support to their kids in their journey ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, may, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32824427481 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.722506001 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595419847328 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.1606999567 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.0666666667 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4666666667 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13333333333 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.420858710591 0.244688304435 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145598457439 0.084324248473 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0997280818817 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.289525283647 0.151304729494 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400310477975 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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