One of the current issues that receive concerns from many people in the world today is the amount of people willing or being obliged to go and work overseas. This has brought some benefits to people but it has also created complex effects. The following essay will takes a look at both sides of the argument and expresses my views as follows.
First and foremost, a number of indigenous people believe that there are many disadvantages when become a migrant worker or international student. One of the most viable drawbacks is getting used to new environment, as well as weather condition. In addition, people will suffer from sleep deprivation due to time changes in different city and the consequence is feeling less energy as result of low efficiency at both school and work place. Another point to consider is if a person live independently without their family or acquaintances, it'll be harder for them to take care of themselves on their own. Not to mention having mental illness such as depression when there's no one they can confide in.
One the other hand, I genuinely feel that its advantages outweigh the drawbacks. The first major benefit is that there often better career prospects available outside their hometown to people of working ages. Historically, people from all over the world especially Asians came to Western country not only for career fulfillment but also to give their children a prosperous life. Secondly, high chances are many adolescents can make more new foreign friends, the more friends they make the more social butterfly they become. Besides, children will be able to see various aspects in their daily life.
To encapsulate, living and working in a foreign country could present a number of merits and demerits, but I believe its merits outweigh the demerits. Therefore, it is critical for the society to make good use of these benefits and try to minimize the undesirable effects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0062305296 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68820457606 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607476635514 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8579915159 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.133333333 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205770812448 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559513703193 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526830235125 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11975808877 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0173601506447 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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