Restaurants have become a wide choice in society due to the availability of diverse cuisines. In my opinion, although the food factories are convenient, this phenomenon has detrimental impacts on the ambience, dietary plans, and family bonding.
One of the main reasons for fast food's popularity is the convenience factor. Instead of having to spend time in the kitchen or at the grocery store preparing a meal, one can spend mere minutes at a restaurant and get a full meal. It is beneficial during busy schedules.
To commence with, with the increasing food industry, the waste amount is also rising exponentially. Restaurants are producing a great amount of litter which is thrown in the environment and they are lacking in waste disposal management. Besides this, growing outlets causes deforestation resulting in loss of natural habitat. In other words, for constructing the restaurants, forests are being cut down which destroys the place for habitats. The more these outlets will grow, the more it adversely affects the ambience and its living beings.
Furthermore, having the option of readily available food is far more convenient for individuals as it saves time and efforts of cooking at home. That is why, people prefer to grab their meals from these places which affects their health and cultivate poor eating habits of eating junk outside. This unbalanced diet results in obesity problems. In addition, it also negatively impacts our relations with family members. Because everyone is eating outside, families are more likely to be fragmented due to lack of communication. They hardly spend time together at home and meal time is the only time when family stays together in this hectic world which is also taken away by these food industries.
In conclusion, although the eating places are helpful in grabbing the food when there is no time to cook, I firmly agree that the rising number of restaurants have a detrimental impact on our lifestyle, environment and family's close knit bond.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 34, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'foods'' or 'food's'?
Suggestion: foods'; food's
...ng. One of the main reasons for fast foods popularity is the convenience factor. I...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, if, so, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1692.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19018404908 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7949280076 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59509202454 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1103115363 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5294117647 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1764705882 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47058823529 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131522759303 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0391965352972 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403171812455 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0728950344741 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423473797141 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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