Today lots of people have a shopaholic life style compared to the past. It is widely believed that shopping has a significant impact on our mood and beautiful appearance of everything. In my view, this opinion is far from negative, as there are several benefits and some drawbacks to make shopping as a hobby.
One thing that people likely to notice first when they come across any challenging situations is stress or the lack of happiness. Then they want to avoid stress with joyful activities such as shopping and gathering with friends. In this case, people can buy new clothes or some wonderful things, and it may be efficient way to rise their mood and keep calm. However, there are some disadvantages for our career and finance like waste of time and things which they buy frequently.
Furthermore, modern clothes and fashionable household equipment are more attractive than the old ones. Everyone wants to own this kind of things, because they have high quality despite the expensive price. Nowadays, so many people are keen on collecting brandy and expensive things in order to be attractive. However, it can affect national culture with unusual contemporary styles. As a result conventional things may lost their value and people tend to create extraordinary trends which are harmful for youngsters’ behavior.
To conclude, being a shopaholic person depends on money and people have to work a lot in order to spend money on shopping. As a result, they try to improve their financial skills to make more money.
- Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones Why is this the case Do you think this is a positive or negative development 73
- In the past shopping was a routine domestic task Many people nowadays regard it as a hobby To what extent do you think this is a positive trend 61
- Competitiveness is a positive quality for people in most societies How does competitiveness affect individuals Is it a positive or negative trend 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, then, kind of, such as, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1276.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02362204724 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7320338446 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61811023622 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.9307816476 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.1428571429 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108601536775 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0356417461738 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0277703664938 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0651859065652 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318953388653 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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