Advertising is becoming more and more common in everyday life.
Is this a positive or negative development?
Currently, advertising has big role in our daily life and it is getting more popular. I think it has some drowbacks, most ads are not necessary and interesting. In addition they have negative effect on our mood while people watch TV so by this way they may lose belief of these advertisements.
On the one hand, these days a huge number of advertisements are unnecessary and they do not highlight people's interest. The reason of that there are unlimited of way to advertise someone's goods say on TV, social media, magazines and in the streets via banners eo anyone can present any products on these mass media sources which are likely to be useless for viewers. Also, most of them are simple and identical, so they are disliked by public, because people watch a duplicate version of other ads.
Users of media tend to watch a lot of comedy videos or serials where these videos have a lot of views. Marketing system are aware about it and usually promote their ads on these types of videos. By this way, they may affect on people's mind and attitude towards the ads in a negative way because users are disturbed while they enjoy their favourite shows or serials. This trend trigger to avoid people from these products almost anywhere which may lose people's belief to most of goods shown in mass media.
To conclude, rises in the quantity of advertisements on media sphere have few negative sides from society. I would recommend to impose regulations from government in order to ban and limit some advertisement industries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
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Line 5, column 218, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
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Message: Consider replacing "in a negative way" with adverb for "negative"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...oples mind and attitude towards the ads in a negative way because users are disturbed while they...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...negative way because users are disturbed while they enjoy their favourite shows o...
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the goods') or simply say ''most goods''.
Suggestion: most of the goods; most goods
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommend imposing'.
Suggestion: recommend imposing
...ew negative sides from society. I would recommend to impose regulations from government in order to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, while, i think, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1266.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79545454545 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6180463454 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2143610405 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.5 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119793212867 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473508723767 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586627374735 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0822382013073 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503454908976 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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