Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because our society today is just so busy and crowded, we should not expect people to be polite to one another.
No one can deny the fact that today’s society is fast-paced, which leads many to believe that people should not have the expectation of others being polite to each other. In my opinion, this is reasonably true because we should first behave mannerly before wanting others to be polite to us, and also, politeness is merely one way of social interaction and does not have any concrete meaning in deciding whether a person is good or not.
To begin with, one should first demonstrate politeness to others if one wishes to be treated politely because the show of politeness is reciprocal. Because today’s society is somewhat indifferent, most people would only reflect on what they receive and show them in their behavior. In other words, when people receive politeness, respect, or kindness, they would be more likely to act out these merits and influence others in this way. Therefore, anyone who desires others to be polite should be the one doing this as an example. For example, I always wanted to live in a world of politeness, so I showed politeness to others. As time passed, I found out that not only had I influenced people around me, like my neighbors, into more polite people, but I had also created happy moments for strangers. If I had just wanted other people to be more polite without actually taking any action, I would not have been able to change the world around me into what I what.
Moreover, even though it is generally good that people are polite to each other, it is only a lifestyle that has no actual meaning in telling whether a person is virtuous or vices. A person can have the best behavior and still do many evil deeds, while a seemingly rude and ribald person can be warm and helpful. Thus, there is no necessity to expect people to be polite to each other. For example, my mother and I went on a group trip several years ago, and in that group, there was a woman who constantly spat gum on the floor, which was quite impolite in our eyes, so we had a bad impression of her. However, when we needed help in lifting heavy packages, she was actually very willing to provide help. This event totally changed how my mother and I viewed the importance of politeness and taught us a great lesson.
In conclusion, it is unnecessary to expect others to be polite because people should first change their behavior before expecting others, and politeness is not an essential measurement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 10.4613686534 258% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 5.04856512141 218% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 7.30242825607 219% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 22.412803532 192% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 30.3222958057 168% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1994.0 1373.03311258 145% => OK
No of words: 427.0 270.72406181 158% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66978922717 5.08290768461 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.04702891845 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51746963495 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 145.348785872 150% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510538641686 0.540411800872 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 645.3 419.366225166 154% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 3.25607064018 307% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 1.25165562914 559% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.51434878587 330% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 21.2450331126 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.3579992736 49.2860985944 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.625 110.228320801 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6875 21.698381199 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.875 7.06452816374 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291067724398 0.272083759551 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108837792849 0.0996497079465 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729982072895 0.0662205650399 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199785933128 0.162205337803 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411461767082 0.0443174109184 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.3589403974 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 53.8541721854 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.0289183223 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.2367328918 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.42419426049 96% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 63.6247240618 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 10.7273730684 182% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.498013245 118% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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