The table compares the number of tourists visiting Ashdown Museum before and after its refurbishment. The two pie charts continue to show the percentage of visitors’ attitudes towards these changes in the same mentioned time.
Overall, the renovated Ashdown Museum welcomed a higher number of travelers compared to the past. Moreover, while dissatisfaction was the dominant feeling that visitors usually had during the year before refurbishment, an optimistic sign happened when that feeling was replaced by satisfied attitudes later on.
Regarding the table, 74,000 people was the starting number of the survey in Ashtown Museum, which soon increased noticeably to 98000 people after being refurbished.
In the pie charts, the proportion of visitors who shared the feeling of dissatisfaction declined significantly from 40%, the highest figure in pie, to only one-third of it at 15% after refurbishment. 10% was the the rate of people being extremely dissatisfied which was double the figure of the year later. Having a similar rising trend, the percentage of visitors who were very satisfied and satisfied increased from 15% and 30% to 35% and 40% respectively, and became the frequent attitudes among people when entering the new museum. Additionally, the figure of not responding people remained stable at 5% each period.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 208, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
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Line 4, column 208, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
... it at 15% after refurbishment. 10% was the the rate of people being extremely dissatis...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, regarding, so, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1127.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47087378641 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00206122045 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592233009709 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1999952699 43.030603864 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.222222222 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8888888889 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 5.23603664747 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307115506925 0.215688989381 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114866330391 0.103423049105 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600036485648 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182259269384 0.15604864568 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.077377878887 0.0819641961636 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 61.2550243902 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.3012195122 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 11.4140731707 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 40.7170731707 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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