Many people believe that cooking is an essential life skill and should be taught to boys and girls in schools. Others disagree and believe it is a waste of school time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
This is a universally acknowledged fact that food is one of the basic needs of everyone. Therefore, many people hold the opinion that if adolescents are taught with cooking skills from childhood it is a better option; whereas, others have the conflicting views. While, in the below essay I will try to enunciate on this fact with my own perception.
To begin with, there are numerous reasons why people favoring on this fact think that if kids are taught with cooking skills, it would be a beneficial for them in near future. Firstly, many parents do not allow their kids to leave their dwelling fo...
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Dear Sir, Thanks for your
Dear Sir,
Thanks for your comments.
I had corrected the mistake and rephrase that sentence. Can you please re-evaluate
regards
7.0 out of 9 but you need to
7.0 out of 9
but you need to always keep it in mind.
Fortunately there are many
Fortunately there are many cookery courses found in the regions mentioned by you Suzy. Finding English speakers is easy and can be learnt through www.gtacaterer.ca where every need is catered. Private chefs are also available for hiring who come to your home and teach different recipes.
it is better option;
it is a better option;
it is not advisable option
it is not an advisable option
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No. of Words: 438 while No. of Different Words: 205
Need to polish sentences, look:
there are many students who are currently staying in the hostel and
they need to either rely on fast foods for eating or a meal that is normally supplied by food vendors. Thus,
they do not get the food of their choice. However, if
they know cooking this kind of problem will not bother them and
they can concentrate on their studies.
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Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 21 15
No. of Words: 438 350
No. of Characters: 2037 1500
No. of Different Words: 205 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.575 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.651 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.327 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 141 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 93 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 54 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 26 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.857 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.37 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.81 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.29 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.459 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.08 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5