Which do you prefer with the same rate of pay an interesting and challenging job with less vacation or a job with more vacation time but less fun | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Which do you prefer with the same rate of pay, an interesting and challenging job with less
vacation or a job with more vacation time but less fun?

Many people states that they prefer an interesting and challenging job although with less vacation, since they do not want their jobs to be boring. But I disagree with them, I believe that if we have a job with more vacation even though it may be less fun, we can do something fun when we are having fun during vacation and we have our own choices to be chosen. Besides, having vacation can offer us with better bodies.

First, having lots of vacation means that you have plenty of days which are belong to you. You can decide where to go and what to do by yourself. In this case, you can gain lots of happiness from your vacation. Even though your work may be boring, you are having lots of wonderful vacation. However, if you have a more challenging job, you have to focus on only one thing without resting, you can feel tired and lost your interests finally. Take me as an example, I am a student majoring in physics, I chose this major since I like physics. But when I have worked on a challenging question for a long time without resting, I find that it's hard for me to concentrate anymore. Even I like physics, I feel tired and my body is resisting seating infront of the desk and thinking about that question. At that time, I always stand up and go out for a walk to relax myself to make me feel better.

Besides, continuously working without resting can do harm on our bodies, cause we human beings are still animals not robots. Our bodies can not support us to do that. In this case having vacation to refresh ourselves matters! Take my father who works in a bio-tech company as an example. Back to the old days, he liked to stay late in his company since he was so attracted by his work. He wanted to discover something new which can help his company earn profit. He was those kinds of people who love an interesting and challenging job, but later things changed. Once when he finished his work, he found that he did not have a weekend for several months. He felt he was so tired and did not want to touch those experment facilities anymore. What's worse, he found his body was in a bad condition and fall into sleep. We send him to a hospital, and when he wake up next day. He told us he would never work without resting.

As conclusion, I want to say having vacation is one of the most important things for human beings. Vacation can bring you happiness and provide you with good health.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 77, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'belonged'.
Suggestion: belonged
... that you have plenty of days which are belong to you. You can decide where to go and ...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 741, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
...uch those experment facilities anymore. Whats worse, he found his body was in a bad c...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 855, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wakes'.
Suggestion: wakes
... We send him to a hospital, and when he wake up next day. He told us he would never ...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, first, however, if, may, so, still, i feel

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 82.0 43.0788530466 190% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1959.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 449.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.36302895323 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60321845022 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34079644128 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505567928731 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 607.5 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 22.0 9.59856630824 229% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.9649101145 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.36 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.96 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 5.45110844103 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270852350453 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730790505588 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0917096722585 0.0737576698707 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199106975097 0.150856017488 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135830150348 0.0645574589148 210% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 10.9000537634 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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