Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Nowadays, the Internet is developing fast. I believe that It will benefit a country a lot if its government spends money to improve Internet access, which can not only help people who come from different parts of a country to communicate more easily, but also provide a country with to develop advanced technology.

First of all, communicating with people is always much faster through the Internet than transporting from one place to another place, no matter how good the public transportation is. By using some online meeting applications, people can discuss with all people all over the world within seconds. Just take me as an example. If I am reading a professional book which is written by a people who lives on another side of the country, and I have some question about a figure in that book which I can not understand. So, I can just send an e-mail to ask the writer about it. Then, I may have the chance to discuss with the writer to get the meaning of that picture using an online meeting application. This can be done much faster than public transportation, since even the fastest aircraft may still take hours to arrive at another city.

Secondly, good access to the Internet can also provide a country with the opportunities to develop advanced technology. For example, It's better to use robots to do some highly dangerous work rather than just let people deal with them at the risk of their lives. And of course, controlling a robot remotely requires a good and stable Internet connection, since lots of data are needed to be sent between the robot and the control center. Other aspects require a really fast Internet connection, such as VR technology and cloud storage technology. Only if the government spends money to help establish a widespread Internet access to all the areas in their country can provide the high technology company with a possible situation to research those technologies.

In that case, I believe that a country can develop fast if its government tries to hold the opportunities which are provided by the Internet. And all those opportunities can not be provided by the public transportation system.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, still, then, for example, of course, such as, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1784.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 365.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88767123288 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81546809149 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506849315068 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.1198124092 48.9658058833 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.5 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8125 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1875 5.45110844103 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184627662843 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059881061 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047121082222 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118379184762 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376879324254 0.0645574589148 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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